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At the Speed of Dreams

Monday, August 30th, 2010

by Dame Devon

Now mind you, I am not the fastest writer. A lot of authors write more than three books a year and still have time to write several short stories, novellas, and hey, maybe a script or two. But since this year was the first time I’ve tried something new–writing three books in twelve months–I thought I’d share a little about my process.

First, let’s go over the reality of how much time goes into writing ONE book. For me, the steps are:

•    Outline –  3 days to 1 week
•    Write zero draft  –  3 to 4 months
•    Revise for reader draft — 1 week
•    Revise with reader input  –  3 days to 1 week
•    Submit & wait for reply  –  3 weeks to 4 months
•    Revise with editor’s input  –  1 to 2 weeks
•    Wait for copy edits  –  1 to 2 months
•    Revise copy edits  –  1 week
•    Wait for proofs  –  1 month
•    Revise proofs  –  1 week

So from the very first step of, “hey, I have an idea” to “The End” it’s about 9 months. But wait, you say, there’s an awful lot of waiting time in that schedule. You’re right! And that waiting time (plus the 3 other months of the year) are there for the taking. Maybe you’re the kind of writer who will want to spend more time on the outline, or on the first (zero) draft. Maybe you’re the kind of writer who hates revision and will take a couple extra weeks for that part of the process.

Cool. That’s absolutely fine to do if you want to write one book a year. And many, many, many successful writers do. One book a year is a great pace. (And if you want to look at it via daily word count, to draft a book in 4 months, it’s: 1,000 words a day (approximately 4 double-spaced pages)  5 days a week for 80 days =  80,000 word novel.)

But what if you want to write two books a year? How do you fit 18 months of work into 12?

You’ll work on book B during the waiting times for book A. Brilliant! And it works too.

Except….remember, you won’t have control over when book A’s revisions/copy edits/proofs show up. Your editor is also a very busy person and she is working on many other books too. So when the editorial letter/copy edits/proofs land in your inbox, you’ll need to drop everything you’re doing on book B and switch projects to hit those tight turn-around deadlines. (Revisions, copy edits, and proofs each require you to go through your novel from beginning to end at least once.)

Ok, you say, it’s workable. Basically six months of the year for each book, with work from one slotted into the wait time of the other.  Yes.

But what if you want to write three books a year? This, for me, was where it got tricky.

The Allie Beckstrom books come out every six months, in November and May. That schedule was pretty easy to hit. It cut the year nicely in half and scattered my deadlines in a manageable manner.

Adding in the deadlines for the steampunk novel, DEAD IRON, which will be released in July 2011, didn’t cut my writing schedule and year nicely in thirds. Because of the deadlines already in place for the Allie Beckstrom novels, DEAD IRON had to be written in two time blocks–at the beginning of the year for a month-and-a-half, then dropped while I wrote an entire Allie Beckstrom novel, then picked back up in the summer and finished in two months.

Did I do it? Yes, so far. I’ll turn in DEAD IRON on September 1st, my deadline for that book, then dive right into the editorial revisions I’ve received for book #6 of the Allie Beckstrom series. After that, I’ll start work immediately on the next Allie Beckstrom book.

What’s my point about all this scheduling mumbo-jumbo?

My point is this: even though I have never tried writing three books a year, some of the things I did before I was published gave me the skills to pull this off.

1. I wrote a book in a year. I did that for several years, getting used to the schedule, learning through trial and error my processes, how to fit “real life” around my writing career, and getting the feel for creating a work that size at a yearly pace.

2. I gave my work to trusted readers and learned how to revise to the input that rang true to me. It’s important to get comfortable with revisions, and practice doing them in a timely manner, because revising on deadline is part of the process too.

3. I tried to write every day, (hey, I’m not perfect, there were lots of days I failed, lol!) I learned that if I wrote every day it kept me from getting rusty, and words–good words–added up more quickly than if I wrote in bursts here and there.

4. I thought about what my next book was going to be while I was writing the current book. Having the next cool thing out there waiting for me helped to keep me going when the book I was working on got difficult.  It also let me practice outlining and beginning the next book with very little down time between projects.

5. I learned to get comfortable with the work that goes into writing, and even learned to like the hard stuff that makes my brain hurt. ;)

And mostly, I learned that all writing, no matter if it’s fast or slow, finished or just a glimmer of an idea, is a vital part of the process of being a writer. There are no wrong ways to be a writer. There is only your way, and your way might change daily, or remain constant throughout your career. But it is up to each of us to try, fail, learn, explore, and maybe even thrive in the challenges we face.  We must have the courage to set our eyes on a dream, and not stop until we write our way to it.

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How I Got to Where I Am

Monday, August 16th, 2010

by Dame Devon

For the next couple weeks, the Deadline Dames will be talking about how we started, where our paths led, and where we are now. No two writers have the same road to publication, and I think it’s going to be fun to learn how my fellow Dames started out and how they got to where they are today.  I’m the first up, so here goes:

Let’s face it. I’m old. I’ve been writing and submitting short fiction and books for a long time. The first short story I wrote back in 1991 was immediately rejected by Asimov’s Science Fiction magazine. I was pregnant with my first child, working full time, and prone to emotional outbursts. So what did I do when I saw that rejection? I decided to show that ol’ meanie Asimov (actually, the editor Gardner Dozois) that he didn’t know what he had missed out on. I expanded the short story into a novel. My first book is a horrible cliche-filled young adult science fiction that now lives in a trunk.

To get us through the next nineteen years without sucking up all the bandwidth on the internet, I shall sum up:

1991-1994 I joined a local writers group (no critiques)  that met once a month. They held a monthly 200 word contest. I sharpened my story arc and editing skills on those contests, while I wrote short fiction and tried to sell it to Marion Zimmer Bradley’s Fantasy Magazine. I did not realize Marion Zimmer Bradley was famous for her acid rejections. My first exposure to rejection for my stories was, and I quote: “Why don’t you try writing about likable characters?”  “Suspension of disbelief does not mean hanging by the neck until dead” and my favorite: “I couldn’t care less if these characters lived or were swallowed by an earthquake.”

Surprisingly, instead of turning every rejected short story into a novel, I revised them and sent them to other markets to collect more rejections. Meanwhile, at the local writing group, I was encouraged to submit stories for a fish and wildlife magazine. I wrote a couple outdoors stories (which I had never tried to write before) and not only sold them, but ended up writing a fishing column for three years. In this time, I also had a second child and was working part time jobs and caring for my grandmother who lived with us.

1995-1996 The local group broke up, but I met with two dear writing friends from the group every month to critique. I was the only one who wrote science fiction and fantasy but their “outsider” perspective on the genre (and their encouragement) was invaluable.

1997 I had sold enough stories to Marion Zimmer Bradley and other magazines to join the Science Fiction Writer’s of America.  I felt like I’d arrived! Plus, I now had two horrible novels in my trunk.  I was also going to local science fiction conventions and listening to the speakers and submitting my stories for critique, soaking up every bit of information I could.

1998 I finally got up the courage to attend the Eugene Oregon’s writers group, the Wordos. For the next six years, a friend and I would drive three hours round trip every Tuesday night to critique up to six short stories at a table with up to thirty writers in attendance. I learned so much from this group.  It focused on science fiction, fantasy, and horror, and had both unpublished, published and extremely well-published members. All the voices at the table were valuable.  Horrible novel count was up to three, since I decided horrible novel #2 shouldn’t be science fiction, but instead rewritten as a fantasy.  I continued to go to conventions and learn, learn, learn.

1999-2001 I added another novel to the trunk–a third try at horrible novel #2-3.  I also wrote a lot of short fiction, sold a good portion of it, and wrote a high fantasy novel that I trunked. I instead sent horrible novel #3 around to agents, and had requests for a full, and even had an agent pick it up, though the agent wanted either extensive revisions or a new novel. While I contemplated what to do, the agent changed agencies, and I realized I wasn’t a good fit and regretfully ended that conversation.

2002 I attended a beginning professional writer’s workshop at the Oregon Coast. This workshop was focused on the business of writing, the career, and the hard truths of publishing. Two quotes from the workshop still resonate with me today: “You are in charge of your own career.” And, “Publishing is not nice. It is not your friend and it does not like you.”

I think it was that workshop that finally lifted the hopeful, happy “maybe one day” haze from my eyes and turned me into a practical, no-bullshit get-the-damn-work-done and stop-your-bellyaching writer. It taught me that yes, writing is hard.  So what?  If I wanted to succeed, suck it up, get used to pain, and deal with it.

2003-2004 I stopped worrying if I was good enough to write novels, and sat my butt down and decided to write a novel a year, every year, dammit and Amen. In 2003 I wrote a novel I loved and began my agent hunt in earnest. I started book 2 in that series in 2004.

2005 Still on the hunt for an agent, I attended Surrey Writers convention in October and signed up to pitch my novel, and another I had outlined to every agent and editor I could. I even signed up to take the appointments other people hadn’t filled.  That was the first time I met Agent M. She thought my book sounded fun and interesting, and told me to send it. I did. And even though all the editors and agents but one told me to send them my book too, I only sent it to her.  We clicked, and I wanted to give her first shot at the book.

In December, while I had roofers pounding at the house, Agent M. called and offered representation. One of my kids answered the phone, and almost hung up, thinking it was a sales call. I had spent my time between October and December researching Agent M more thoroughly, and had asked myself: “Is she the agent for me? Will I say yes if she offers?” She is, I did, and then I screamed so loud, the roofers almost lost their traction. She began marketing the book.  We got a lot of great compliments on it, but it is a quirky book, and the only other title on the market in a slightly similar vein by a famous author did not do very well.  This did not bode well for me, a debut author.

2006–2007 Book 2 in the series was done, and I had taken a few running starts at three other books.  Book 1 still was getting bites, but no sales. It was nerve-wracking to be so close, and so far away from my dream. I put my head down and kept working.

During this time, I was invited to write a short story for an anthology with the theme of magic + business.  The editor praised my story….and rejected it. It was the first rejection I’ve ever been excited about! Unlike when I wanted to get back at ol meanie Asimov, I was sort of hoping this editor would reject my short story because I knew it was really a book. Maybe even several books. It was what is now the first chapter of MAGIC TO THE BONE.  My how the circle goes round. :)

I told Agent M. I was going to write either X book (magic to the bone) or Y book (still as yet unwritten) next, which one did she want to see? It was October 2006, I think, and through the intervention of a overzealous spam filter, our emails went astray. By early December 2006, we reconnected and she was very interested in MAGIC TO THE BONE.  She wanted to know if I could get it done by February 2007.

I said yes. And I did. By late June we had offers. It went to auction. By August, we had agreed to take Roc’s offer for a three book deal. I got a revision letter right away, and the contract that said book 2 would need to be turned in by November.

2008-NOW I have written six Allie Beckstrom novels, turning them in every six months, and learning how to do editorial revisions, copy edits, proofs, and more. We are in negotiations for the last three of the series now and should have news soon.  (fingers crossed!)

DEAD IRON, the first of two steampunk novels, was sold in November 2009 and I am so excited for these books! Selling this second series means I am now writing three books a year, and I think that is about the top pace I can do at the moment. But I am loving every minute of it, even though it is still lots of hard work. Interestingly enough, this book is also based off a short story. (Huh. I’m sensing a pattern here….)

I’ve also written a few new short stories in the last couple years, and have gone through my old short stories for my collection, A CUP OF NORMAL that comes out in September. I sold the collection to one of the editors who bought one of my first short stories. He suggested putting together the collection while we were hanging out and talking at a convention last year. That is also a terrific feeling to get to work with someone who believed in my work at the very beginning.

Since I’m super-short on time these days, I am no longer attending critique groups, though I still have three or four trusty readers who spare me no pain. I’m also going to less conventions, but I hope to open up my time for more of both in the future. I am still learning, still listening, still soaking up all the information and tips I can find, via the internet, other writers, readers, and the events I attend.  And I hope to be writing for many, many years to come!

Whew!  Did you make it to the end of this?  One thing’s for sure–it’s been a looong road. I can’t begin to tell you how many times I’ve almost given up or how many challenges, both personal and professional, have hit me along the way. But for me, the hard work has been worth it. I love this job. And I hope sharing a little of my path helps to light yours in some way.

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So You Want To Be A Writer

Monday, August 2nd, 2010

by Dame Devon

FIRST AN ANNOUNCEMENT: The winner of T.L. Schaefer’s signed copy of THE SAINTS OF MIDLAND and a $25 gift certificate to Amazon will be chosen Sunday, Auguest 8th by midnight.  Still plenty of time to enter to win!

So last night, I was struggling with writing a chapter of the book (as an aside, some chapters write fast, some make snails look like speedboats.)  (As another aside, when I go back to revise those chapters, I can’t tell the difference between the fast-written and the slow-slog.) Where was I?  Ah, yes, struggling with a chapter of the book that I had been working on for four days.

Tired of banging my head against the monitor, I walked away for a short break, and flipped on the TV to the Food Network and the show, The Next Food Network Star. The basic premise of the show is that the contestants are all chefs from different backgrounds. Some work in restaurants, some are food bloggers, some are caterers, some went to famous cooking schools, some are home cooks.

All of these chefs, from different training and experiences are competing to get their own show on the Food Network.  Their weekly challenges are based on a “theme” i.e. cook something that represents an emotion we’ll assign you, cook something that represents you, but do it with your least favorite food in the world, take an old classic and make it new, etc.  Oh, and do it on a time limit.

I’d caught a few episodes of this show before, but wasn’t following every week.  I don’t know why, but last night it finally dawned on me how much this show parallels a writers’ life.

Writers come from hugely different backgrounds and have different natural abilities, different “spices” and skills in their comfort zones, and very individual ideas about what makes something “good.”  Writers are all hoping to have their own “show” (novel, series, book, short story, article, etc.) out there where people can enjoy it.  And writers are all hoping the judges (editors, agents, readers) will pick their dish, and that they will have a long and successful career making more stuff that people will enjoy.

And suddenly, the entire show transformed for me. This week they were down to five chefs (writers) out of about a dozen or so.  The judges (publishing industry/readers) gave them the challenge  of cooking a dish to represent a single word (genre) assigned by the judges.  The chefs (writers) had 30 minutes (deadline) and $300.00 to shop for the dishes’ ingredients (outline/plot) Then they had 1 hour (deadline) to start their dish, which would be served in front of the judges and two guest experts (editors/agents/readers).  They didn’t get to *finish* their dishes that night.  They got one hour, then had to shove it aside to get on with real life.  (Um…just like in real life.)

The next day, they had 30 minutes to finish the dish (revisions) and present it to the judges and guest experts.(submission)

Here’s the thing that absolutely struck home with me. The chefs were judged on the success of the dish and also on their introduction of it (cover letter/query/synopsis) and their personal attitude toward it.  It was fascinating to see the chefs who lost confidence in their dish halfway through cooking it and who felt worse and worse about it, to the point that when they presented their dish, all they could see were the flaws. (Writers? Are you listening?) They gave poor presentations, and even if the judges liked the dish, the judges didn’t like that the chef wasn’t confident enough to believe in their own creation.

There was one chef who had never won a single challenge in the entire show (months of rejections). He decided he was going to keep a positive attitude and give it all he had to knock it out of the park.  He relaxed into what he was doing and believed in his voice, his story, and his own unique point of view. He hoped it would win, but more than that, he knew he was the only person who could tell his story his way. He stopped worrying, and stopped comparing himself to other competitors, and maybe even stopped working for the judges and instead worked to make that plate something he enjoyed and was having fun with.

(You know where I’m going with this, right?)

The guy who had never won before won.

In the discussion with the other contestants, one chef who had won several other challenges, (been published) said she thought she’d gotten rid of the fear of failure weeks ago, but it was back and that fear of failure halfway through cooking her dish had tripped her up so bad, she had failed the challenge.

You know what the judges said?  “When you have your own show, you’re not going to have a group of therapists standing around every day to tell you you’re good enough.  How bad do you want this?”

And I heard, “You have to believe in yourself.  You have to believe in your story.  Don’t let fear kill the joy of what you can bring to the table.  Write it.  Write it with all your heart, and never look back.”

Then I turned off the TV and finished that damn chapter.

And just for fun, you can click here to see a You Tube interview my publisher did with me a couple months ago. I was actually very nervous about the interview, but I didn’t let my fear of failure get in the way of telling my story, the best I could.

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From Draft to Dream (and a list of upcoming releases)

Monday, July 19th, 2010

by Dame Devon

The Dame readers have asked great questions over the last couple days. Please keep those questions coming! We might not get to it today, but we’ll try to pull questions and dedicate a full post to them, or answer questions in the comments. Feel free to ask us here on the site, or send us an email to the address, right over there on the right column. No question is too large/small/silly/serious, so ask away!

Today’s questions:
Amy R. asks: “When you’re writing your first draft, and it doesn’t seem like it’s matching up with that you have in your head, how do you keep from deleting it or throwing it out?”

Wonderful question, Amy! There are probably as many answers for this as there are writers. Here are eight tips:
1. Walk away. When a draft is so frustrating that all you want to do is throw it across the room, it’s time to step away from the keyboard.
2. Save the file. Even if you think it’s garbage. You never know when you’ll want to go back and ressurrect the story, or maybe dip in and steal a character or a descriptive line.
3.Come back to it in a couple days, a week, a month. You might see the good amidst the cringe-worthy and be able to roll up your sleeves and get the story going again.
4. Get an outside opinion. Sometimes the author is the least capable person on the planet to make an accurate judgement call on the quality of their prose.
5. Try again. If the story is so far off from what you want it to be, save it and start fresh. Focus on the core of the story–the spark of wonder that made you want to write it–and write until you feel you have your feet under you again.
6. Accept that your story probably never will live up to your vision. It is common for writers to feel they have yet to write something that matches the vision, emotion, scope and quality of what they had in mind for it. There will always be a slight dream-like disconnect between our imagining brain’s vision, and our writing brain’s power to express that vision with words. It is what makes us strive to improve no matter how long we have been writing.
7. Finish the story to discover the story. You can’t fully know what the story is until you write The End. At that point, you can look from beginning to end, and see what the story wanted to say, what it wanted to become. Maybe it’s exactly what you had in mind. Maybe it’s wildly different.
8. Keep trying. Keep writing. Keep going. Trying and failing and trying again isn’t bad. It’s the way we become intimate with story, our writing process, and the struts and trusses our dreams are built upon. Remember:It’s the writing that teaches you.” –Isaac Asimov

And the second question from Jess: When are your next releases? (All of you.)

Great question, Jess, thanks for asking!  Here’s a fairly comprehensive list of what the Dames have cooking:

Upcoming Releases (as of July 2010)

Keri Arthur
MERCY BURNS –    May 2011
Debut novel (Dark Angels series)   -   August 2011

Toni Andrews/Virginia Reede
Book 3 (Carnal Magic) by Virgina Reede   – 2010
Nocturne novel (Mercy Hollings 4)   –   2011
“Nativitas” THE MAMMOTH BOOK OF FUTURISTIC ROMANCE   –   2011

Jenna Black

SHADOWSPELL (Faeriewalker 2)   –   January 4, 2011
DARK DESCENDANT (new adult urban fantasy series, Pocket Books)   –   April 26, 2011
“Nine-tenths of the Law”(Morgan Kingsley, urban fantasy anthology, TOR Books)   –   May 2011

Jackie Kessler
HOTTER THAN HELL mass-market paperback   –   September 2010
HUNGER (The Horsemen of the Apocalypse/Riders’ Quartet)   –   October 18, 2010
“To Hell With Love” THE MAMMOTH BOOK OF PARANORMAL ROMANCE 2   –   winter 2010/2011
“Hell Bound” THOSE WHO FIGHT MONSTERS   –   March 2011
RAGE (The Horsemen of the Apocalypse/Riders’ Quartet)   –   spring 2011
“Hell’s Fury” THE MAMMOTH BOOK OF HOT ROMANCE   –   spring 2011
“Where We Are Is Hell” AFTER HOURS: TALES FROM THE UR-BAR   –   spring 2011

Karen Mahoney
“The Spirit Jar” (Moth 2)  KISS ME DEADLY   –   August 3, 2010
“Dear Diary…” essay -  WELCOME TO MYSTIC FALLS (anthology devoted to The Vampire Diaries) – October 2010
THE IRON WITCH –   February 1, 2011

Devon Monk
A CUP OF NORMAL (short story collection)   –   September 2010
MAGIC AT THE GATE (Allie Beckstrom 5)   –   November 2010
MAGIC ON THE HUNT (Allie Beckstrom 6)   –   April 2011
DEAD IRON (The Age of Steam 1)   –   July 2011

Lilith Saintcrow
JEALOUSY (Strange Angels 3)   –   July 29, 2010
HEAVEN’S SPITE (Jill Kismet 5)   –   November 2010

Rachel Vincent
“Fearless” KISS ME DEADLY   –   August 3, 2010
ALPHA (Shifters 6)   –   September 28, 2010
Untitled (Tod’s) online novella   –   December 1, 2010
MY SOUL TO STEAL (Soul Screamers 4)   –   January 1, 2011
IF I DIE (Soul Screamers 5)   –   June 1, 2011
Debut novel (untitled adult series)   –   September 1, 2011 (date tentative)
“Hunt ” (urban fantasy anthology, TOR Books)   –   May 2011

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Roads to Success

Monday, July 5th, 2010

by Dame Devon

I believe that no two writers begin their career in the same place, follow the same path, nor reach the same goal. That is both a wonderful and frustrating thing about the writing profession.When you look ahead for markers to show you where you might be on the path of your career, there are very few agreed upon indicators.

When you look at other writers to try to compare your career, there are too many inconsistencies between your path and the other person’s path to make a clear-cut judgment on if you are steaming ahead at a good pace, dawdling, or somehow turned around in the opposite direction and halfway down a road that will never take you where you want to go.

How, really, should a writer judge their success?

I don’t know. I have a list of what other writers have told me make them feel successful. Off the top of my head fiction writers may or may not feel successful if they:

  • win contests
  • win grants
  • win awards
  • have a MFA
  • teach writing
  • sell short stories
  • sell short stories to top markets
  • edit a publication
  • finish a novel
  • sell a novel
  • sell a novel to a top market
  • sell a series
  • sell several series
  • write more than one novel a year
  • write a best selling novel
  • write novels that hit the best-sellers top ten list
  • write a #1 NYT best selling novel in paperback/hardcover
  • are interviewed in magazines/radio/television
  • do book tours
  • are asked to be a panelist at conferences/conventions
  • are respected in their genre
  • have novels optioned by Hollywood
  • have a novels made into a movie/television show
  • get large advances
  • earn out fast and have multiple print runs
  • make a living on writing money alone
  • write in multiple genres
  • write under multiple names
  • sell foreign rights
  • are famous
  • are rich…and the list goes on.

It is up to each writer to decide what success means to them and to do everything they can to achieve that. Your success may  not be on that list, and that is perfectly fine. I believe it is every writer’s prerogative to define what success means to them on a project-to-project basis, or heck, a daily-seat-of-pants-to-the-seat-of-the-chair basis.

But wouldn’t it be nice if there were some kind of clear marker on the career path?  Some way of knowing that you are going forward and in the right direction?

Luckily, there is. It isn’t the sort of clear-cut corporate rule that measure progress in raises and vacation time and offices with a view. No, the guide posts on a writing career path are a lot like the writing industry in general. They are made of thousands of  voices of writers sharing the thoughts and insights observed, and sometimes shouted, from the middle of the path that writer is in the process of walking. It’s much like the game of Marco Polo, where a writer calls out, and other writers call back to say, “yes, we’re still here with you, in the same water trying to reach the shore.”

You read those voices in blogs and web pages and journals. You, hopefully, read those voices here. And you can hear those voices at conferences, on panels, in critique groups, at the bar, in the halls: writers sharing what they know from their path–writers offering up a lantern that might only muddy the fog you are in, or might shine a hard light on that treacherous curve ahead.

It’s up to you, to every writer, to listen to all the voices and sort out the useful bits that will help you take the next steps down the path.

Oh, and about that wrong road? The one that you are afraid you might be traveling at top speed, and which will waste weeks, or maybe even years of your writing career?

That road doesn’t exist. So long as you are writing what you love and listening to the most important voices of all–your heart, muse, instinct, inspiration, and soul–you will not go astray. All writing is necessary. Every word, even if it never sees print, is teaching you, helping you, and guiding you to success.

Don’t give up. We’re all out here in the water with you, calling out so you can make it to shore.

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