Posts Tagged ‘characters’

By any other name…

Wednesday, July 21st, 2010

Last week, after MUCH agonizing and effort, I finished the  Tod novella. The specifics for that aren’t official yet, but the plan (again: not final yet!) is to release it as a free online novella (like My Soul To Lose was) in December, one month in advance of the My Soul To Steal release. Right now, it’s about a thousand words shorter than My Soul To Lose, but that could change in edits. Even though it’ll be free, it’s going through the full spectrum of edits/proofreading with my editor and the awesome people at HQTeen. So, with any luck, there’ll be some free Tod goodness floating around in a few months. ;)

Tomorrow, I start writing IF I DIE, the fifth Soul Screamers novel. But today, I’m trying to pin down some specifics for my new adult series, so the art department can begin designing the cover. Yes, before I’ve written the novel. Because my life is chaotic like that.

Yesterday, on the seven hour drive back to San Antonio from OKC, #1 and I brainstormed some titles for the new adult series. My original titles got shot down (a first for me, but not at all uncommon in the industry) because we want something that will stand out from the crowd. So this morning I sent my editor a list of possibilities for both the series and the first two novels.

No, unfortunately I can’t talk specifics about the series yet, other than to say that it’s urban fantasy/paranormal, with no vamps, shifters, witches, or any of the typical paranormal fare. But I could use a little help from readers. You see, one of my characters needs a new name. She’s one of the main characters in the first novel. If you submit a suggestion and yours is chosen, you’ll be thanked in the acknowledgements of the first novel. [Note: The choice is not mine along; my editor gets a say too, with good reason. She caught the redundant rhythm in my original name choice.]

Here are the specifics. This name is for a woman and cannot end in a long E (-ee, -ie, or -y) or a short A (-a) sound. It cannot start with an L or a K (or hard C) sound.

As most people know, naming a character is serious business. For me, the name helps shape the character, and having to change it in mid-book can make the character very hard for me to get to know/like. So I’d like to start this one off right. If you  have suggestions, leave them here.

Thanks!

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If You Need Permission, Babe, You’ve Got It

Friday, February 12th, 2010

Dame Lili

It’s Friday again! Which means, time for another Friday writing post. I suggest you click back a day and read Dame Toni’s most excellent Brain Frozen, Need Help! Because she says it better than I could.

Today I’m resurrecting a Golden Oldie from my blog vaults. This post went up in July of ’07, and is taken from an actual email I wrote to an actual young writer’s desperate call for help. I think it’s held up pretty well, in conjunction with my other advice to young writers. So, without further ado, here’s something I wrote pretty much two years ago and reread this morning. It fired me up all over again. Oh, and please note: there are four-letter words ahead. If that bothers you, stop now.

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I’m Not Them, But I’m Just As Scared

Friday, February 5th, 2010

Dame Lili

I can definitively state I AM NOT MY CHARACTERS.

Most of them–Danny and Jill spring immediately to mind for some reason–come from a pretty dark place. Others, not so much. I’ve had some scary experiences in my life (and something tell me I will have still more, life being what it is.) Some of those scary experiences are fuel. Others are just…there. They don’t go into books, they’re too personal. I have to come to terms with them in other ways.

Using the fuel of scary experiences can be good. It can help you process, it can help you deal. There are several different types of artistic fuel, however, and getting hooked on one to the exclusion of all others is a chancy proposition. Art does not live by one fuel alone–and trying to make it can have bad effects on you.

Case in point? Well, me. I’m in a state of highly personal, highly charged change right now. Some of the fuel I was using while I was miserable five years ago, or two years ago, or six months ago is no longer around. I don’t have that whip to push myself on. I am, to put it bluntly, afraid that if I get healthier or happier I will no longer be able to peer into those dark places or face them with the courage needed to pull those characters out of the shadows.

Most of me knows this is silly. As someone wise recently told me, “Those miseries were ways you had of coping and surviving. They worked to keep you whole and protect you. They’ll still be there if you need them again.” I know it’s true–I can put them back in my toolbox and get them out if I need them.

But, dear Reader…I’m scared. I’m scared the characters won’t talk to me if we don’t have the pain-points in common. I’m terrified that I’m a one-trick pony. I’m scared that getting healthier and happier will change something in my makeup and send me spinning and careening off into the woods, where my career will die a lonely death and I’ll end up hungry on the street.

I know it’s not rational. I know I’m feeling this because change is inherently frightening. When you add personal change to the cauldron of insecurities writing can and does uncover, it’s about as comfortable as bathing in a tub full of very angry cobras.

So how do you get through? How do you reassure yourself the words will still be there even if you change?

I suppose a simple answer is faith, with a large helping of stubbornness. I did not get to where I am today by listening to the fear or letting the rejection stop me. The words have been there during every other damn change in my life; this one just feels different because I’m suffering it OMGNOW! Time will add a measure of perspective that will drain my panic.

None of this helps with the agony of indecision, fear, and agitation I am experiencing, yea even at this very moment.

Which gives me hope. Over the course of a book, I take people apart. I feel their agonies while I whack away every single solid thing they rely on and put them through the wringer. They risk everything because they have no choice. It’s who they are, and living requires the courage to do no less.

I guess we’re not so different, my characters and me. Which brings me to my bone-deep stubbornness again. If they can make it through everything I can throw at them, I can make it through this. Jill would set her chin, glare out of her mismatched eyes, and stride forward. Danny’s thumb would caress the katana’s guard, and she’d wear that little half-smile. Kaia would grin and brace herself. Even Theo, the calmest and sweetest person I’ve ever written, would fold her arms and get that determined little glint in her eye.

No, they’re not (and never will be) me. But the strength to write them is and always has been mine. If I’ve lost the fuel of misery I’ll find something else to burn. If I’ve kept the fire going this long, I’ll likely find something else to throw on it. I have to trust–not my gods, not my characters, not other people. I have to trust in my own willingness to let the words come through me. I have to trust that I’m still interesting even when I’m not broken. That this will only make me stronger and better.

I’m not my characters. They can still teach me something. And I can look back on creating them and know there’s no shortage. Remember? My job isn’t to make the magic. My job is to show up every day.

I can do that. No matter how scared I am.

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Murder Your Darlings? Or Throw Them A Lifeline?

Tuesday, July 7th, 2009

By Dame Jackie

Yesterday, Dame Devon opened up the floor to questions. Here’s one from Emma:

“One massive problem I have is with the whole idea that you have to kill secondary characters off…I’ve done it, but some how MOST of the time, I find a way to bring them back…am I doing the wrong thing, should I stick with it, or if it helps the story, bring them back? Am I just being a wuss?”

She then clarified:

“If I have a dead character either before or during the story is it always wrong of me to want to find a way to bring them back. I’m always wandering whether doing this is as you said is “doing right by the story,” or am I just trying to stop the suffering of my characters.”

Ah, secondary characters. The stuffing to the main characters’ turkey. The jelly to their peanut butter. They can be red shirts, or they can be sidekicks. They can be love interests, or they can be friends. They can be enemies, or they can be charmingly, deceptively neutral. Without secondary characters, many stories would fall flat. Dealing with only the protagonist and antagonist would make for a boring story.

Think about it: We need secondary characters to move the plot along, to better develop the main characters, and for pacing. Many times, secondary characters act as comic relief to break up the building tension. Secondary characters serve a purpose.

And sometimes, that purpose is to die.

Look at Harry Potter. (Okay, if you haven’t read the books and seriously will be reading them, skip this paragraph, because insane spoilers occur.) The first three books were magical action adventure, with young Harry learning about being a wizard, meeting stalwart new friends (Ron and Hermione), finding a wise mentor (Dumbledore), and first coming face-to-face with a powerful enemy (Voldemort). There’s a lot of character development in these books as Harry becomes stronger. But it’s not until the fourth book, Goblet of Fire, that things take a significantly darker turn — far more so than with the introduction of the Dementors in book three. Near the end of Goblet of Fire, one of Harry’s friends dies. Yes, Rowling softens it a touch by letting the dead play a vital role in the book’s climax, but dead is still dead, and the friend is now gone. Harry loses an even dearer person in book five — and this time, there’s nothing to soften it. In book six, someone that most readers have grown to love is also sacrificed. And in book seven, well, that book should have been called Harry Potter in Death, Doom and Destruction. Fields of dead people. Many of them important characters.

What’s the purpose behind the death of secondary characters? Almost always, it will have an impact, positive or negative, on the protagonist. It’s a life-lesson, surely. But maybe it’s also the kick in the pants to make the protagonist grow up more. To learn about the value of life and love. Or maybe to force the protagonist’s hand and do something, whereas before the protag would have just been moping or writing bad poetry. In Harry Potter, losing the friend in book four ties into Dumbledore announcing something very important at the end of the book, signaling huge change for the remainder of the series. In book five, the death is one that directly affects Harry, forcing him to be far more assertive, even ruthless, in book six. And the death at the end of book six heralds the approaching endgame. All the deaths serve a larger purpose.

Does that mean the dead can never come back? Of course not. Dead isn’t always dead, especially in the paranormal and fantastical. But keep in mind that death is supposed to be final. If we make it easy for the dead to return without any price to pay, then there’s no tension. “Oh, don’t worry. If I get run through with the sword and die a horrid death while saving the world, just bring me back after it’s all said and done, would you?” Nah.

Sometimes, the characters just gotta die.

I killed off a character in Hotter Than Hell that I really, really didn’t want to kill. I knew from the start what her role would be — she was, you could say, destined to die. But as I wrote her scenes and got to know her better, I really hated killing her. Hated it. I did it anyway. She had to die, because events happened due to her death, events that were crucial to making the story work.

When we care about our characters, making them suffer can feel wrong to us as we write it, and ever more so after we read those scenes. But hey — playing god isn’t easy. If it were, everyone would be a writer. ;)

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Dame For A Day Anna Katherine

Saturday, May 23rd, 2009

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Intro by Dame Rinda

The Dames are very proud to welcome Dame for a Day, Anna Katherine!  Her debut novel, Salt and Silver, sounds so cool!  Here’s a taste of the blurb:

One night six years ago, Allie and her friends got drunk and chanted a fake spell they made up… and accidentally opened a portal to Hell. Now it resides in the basement of the diner Allie runs, and it’s a pain in the ass — mystical crap is always coming out, and then it has to be killed. Demon guts get everywhere, stuff gets smashed up, there are salt circles and sigils all over the place… It gets tedious.

The up side is that Allie gets her own personal demon hunter guarding the Door and killing the demons: a sexy and mysterious, Stetson-wearing, snide-remark-making, dark-eyed demon hunter named Ryan.

Salt and silver is out now .  You can read an excerpt here.

AND… A random commenter here will be chosen to win a signed copy!  You can comment over the next week until Saturday, the 30th, at midnight.  We’ll announce the winner on Sunday.  Contest is open to international readers, too.

Who is Anna Katherine?  Anna Katherine is the pseudonym for two women who have both worked in the publishing industry for most of their lives. They wrote Salt and Silver to be a jolly romp, starring a type of heroine they love but rarely see in romance novels. They really do love the mass market art director at Tor Books, and duct tape.

Anna and Kat are both big magic nerds, and hardly had to do any research to write Salt and Silver. Anna likes to say that this is the first time she’s ever used her college degree in religious studies, and that might very well be true. Kat gives a shoutout to her folklore and Greco- Roman magic studies, which gave her a huge library and a lot of ideas.

Turning things over to Anna.  How about giving her a huge welcome! ;)

Writing Characters Without a Spreadsheet

When I was a full time professional fiction editor, and even for a couple of years after that, I spent a good deal of time talking about characters. I even did a couple of panels/lectures on the subject. How to create them. How to make them three dimensional. How to critique someone else’s characters. How to use the characters to either make the plot build up around them or further the plot you’ve already got. How to tailor characters to your plot (and vice versa). How to use someone else’s character to create your own character and the story around that character.

 

We are talking here about an intense amount of time and a huge amount of brain power. Charts! Outlines! Lists! Lots of organizations, because, of course, the easy way, the right way to create a character is to sit down and decide basic facts, and then draw lines between the dots. At one point I even teamed up with another editor and we put together a “Chinese menu” of how to make primary, secondary, and tertiary characters by taking one characteristic from column A, two from column B, three from column C, and combining them.

 

Which is not to say that the hyper-organized way of creating a character doesn’t work. It can work incredibly well for some people. I myself have written more than one novel utilizing charts and lists and spreadsheets to organize my way into characters, plot, and story.  I’ve known lots of writers who do it this way and are very successful at it. 

 

I always thought I was one of them.

 

Imagine my surprise when I sat down to write the 100-page story that would eventually become SALT AND SILVER, and instead of beginning by organizing my thoughts and figuring out what I wanted from the story, I just put my fingers to the keyboard and typed.

 

Here was where I started: I knew I wanted a science fiction/fantasy story, and I knew that I wanted it to be somehow set in a diner in Brooklyn that closely resembled the ersatz diner in which I’d worked for two years. And I knew I wanted the narrator to be someone rarely seen in sf/f novels.

 

It wasn’t very long before I had a pretty decent novella about a sarcastic, very normal, very New York girl who owned a diner and went demon hunting.

 

When Kat and I started to work together, she ripped the story down to its bare bones, and we started over again—keeping many of the same elements (diner, Brooklyn, demon hunting, Doors to Hell, beef stew, bagels, demon hunters divided into factions by their hats), but changing some other things. (Kat is an absolute master at twisty plotting, whereas I can be a bit of a straightforward disaster.)

 

The character stuff was something we weren’t certain about, though. A plot can be told over a cup of coffee — characters are people, and people are complicated. Kat and I never had a conversation about who Allie and Ryan, our main characters, were, or what we wanted from them. I think I might have said, “They’ve never hooked up.” That’s about it.

 

But as it turns out, characters (providing they still act within the realm of real people) will create the story they’re living in — and vice versa. A certain story will necessitate a certain character. So I built the universe, Kat made it go zoom, and while the both of us were very much in tune about getting from Point A to Point XXX, Allie and Ryan grew within the frame of the story we created. Likewise, when Allie and Ryan, as reasonable, realistic people, came across something in the plot that no reasonable, real person would put up with, the story had to change to accommodate that.

 

What it looked like from the outside is that when one of us accidentally wrote a note that rang false, the other would just delete and rewrite, or edit it, until it sounded right and fit into the story. From the inside, it was one of the most organic experiences I’ve ever had — and a big difference from the organization-heavy lists I’d used before.

 

This crazy organic coauthoring method is not something I’d recommend to a first time author. It’s not something I’d recommend to anyone who isn’t instinctively comfortable with it. But there is definitely something interesting and exciting about writing a story without knowing exactly where the characters are going from the moment you start.

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